In IELTS Writing Task 1, you are required to describe, summarize, or explain the information presented in graphs, charts, tables, maps, or processes in at least 150 words. The task types include:
Line Graph
Bar Chart
Pie Chart
Table
Process Diagram
Map Comparison
Mixed Graphs (combination of two types)
1. Introduction (1-2 sentences)
Paraphrase the question.
Mention what type of visual information you’re describing.
2. Overview (2-3 sentences)
Provide a summary of the main trends, differences, or significant features.
Do not include detailed data in this section.
3. Body Paragraph 1 (3-4 sentences)
Describe the first key trend or comparison.
Use data to support your description.
4. Body Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)
Describe the second key trend or comparison.
Use data to support your points.
Introduction: Mention the key features (time period, variables).
Overview: Identify overall trends (e.g., increases, decreases, fluctuations).
Body 1 & 2: Focus on significant trends, grouping similar movements.
Grammar Tips:
Use past tenses for past events ("rose", "decreased").
Use comparative language ("higher than", "lower than").
Use adverbs to describe changes (e.g., "sharply", "gradually").
Example Phrases:
"The number of ___ increased significantly from ___ to ___."
"There was a gradual decline in ___ between ___ and ___."
Introduction: State what the chart shows (categories and comparison).
Overview: Highlight key comparisons or differences.
Body 1 & 2: Group data logically (e.g., highest/lowest figures, similar trends).
Grammar Tips:
Use "while/whereas" for comparisons.
Use present simple tense for general facts.
Use adjectives ("largest", "lowest", "moderate") for comparisons.
Example Phrases:
"In 2010, the figure for ___ was almost twice as high as ___."
"The number of ___ was slightly lower than that of ___."
Introduction: Mention the subject of the pie chart and the time period.
Overview: Identify the largest and smallest segments.
Body 1 & 2: Compare proportions, focusing on similarities and differences.
Grammar Tips:
Use fractions and percentages ("a quarter", "50%").
Use present perfect for ongoing comparisons.
Use linking phrases ("respectively", "accounted for", "constituted").
Example Phrases:
"___ accounted for 40% of the total sales."
"The share of ___ remained unchanged at ___%."
Introduction: Describe what the table shows (e.g., categories, figures).
Overview: Mention the main differences or similarities.
Body 1 & 2: Compare groups logically (highest, lowest, averages).
Grammar Tips:
Use superlatives ("the highest", "the lowest").
Use verb-noun collocations ("experienced growth", "showed stability").
Use accurate quantifiers ("twice as much", "half as many").
Example Phrases:
"The data illustrates that ___ had the highest figure at ___ units."
"The value of ___ increased by 20%."
Introduction: Describe the process or procedure.
Overview: Provide a brief summary of the process (e.g., how many steps, starting and ending points).
Body 1 & 2: Describe each stage step-by-step in sequence.
Grammar Tips:
Use passive voice ("is produced", "is transported").
Use sequence words ("firstly", "subsequently", "finally").
Use present simple tense to describe the process.
Example Phrases:
"First, the raw material is collected and then transported to the factory."
"Next, the mixture is heated until it reaches a specific temperature."
Introduction: Describe what the maps show (before and after changes).
Overview: Mention the main differences or changes over time.
Body 1 & 2: Describe significant changes, such as constructions, demolitions, or expansions.
Grammar Tips:
Use passive constructions ("was built", "was replaced").
Use "used to" for past structures or locations.
Use spatial language ("in the north", "to the left", "adjacent to").
Example Phrases:
"The residential area was replaced by commercial buildings."
"A new road was constructed along the western boundary."
Introduction: Describe the two types of data representation.
Overview: Highlight the main similarities or differences.
Body 1 & 2: Describe trends for each graph/chart separately or integrate comparisons.
Grammar Tips:
Use a combination of comparison language ("in contrast", "similarly").
Use appropriate tense depending on the data (e.g., past for historical trends).
Use linking phrases ("while", "meanwhile", "in comparison").
Tenses:
Present Simple: For general trends and ongoing data.
Past Simple: For historical data.
Present Perfect: For recent changes ("has increased").
Comparatives and Superlatives:
"higher than", "the highest", "lower than".
Adverbs:
"sharply", "gradually", "significantly".
Connectors:
"In contrast", "Similarly", "However", "Therefore", "Consequently".
Identify Main Features:
What stands out (e.g., largest increase, most noticeable change)?
Group Data:
Group categories with similar patterns (e.g., trends over time).
Compare and Contrast:
Mention differences and similarities across categories.
Use Data Effectively:
Support your description with figures (e.g., percentages, numbers).
Writing too much detail in the introduction or overview.
Including opinions or speculations.
Skipping the overview (this is essential).
Repetitive language. Try using synonyms and varying sentence structure.
By mastering these tips and structures, you’ll be well-prepared to achieve a high score in IELTS Writing Task 1!
In IELTS Writing Task 1, your goal is to describe, summarize, and compare visual data like graphs, charts, tables, maps, or processes. Here's a step-by-step outline for the essay and guidance on how to develop each paragraph.
Purpose: Introduce the visual data by paraphrasing the question.
What to include:
Type of visual (e.g., line graph, bar chart).
Time frame (if applicable).
Key focus (e.g., categories, variables being measured).
Example: Question: The bar chart shows the percentage of people who prefer different types of transportation in five cities from 2000 to 2020.
Introduction:
“The bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals who favored various modes of transportation in five cities (A, B, C, D, and E) between 2000 and 2020.”
Purpose: Provide a summary of the main trends, differences, or patterns.
What to include:
General trends (e.g., "overall increase" or "decline").
Largest or smallest category.
Any noticeable pattern (e.g., significant fluctuations or stability).
Example:
"Overall, public transport became the most preferred mode of travel in most cities over the period, while the use of personal vehicles showed a noticeable decline. City B experienced the most significant change, while City D remained relatively stable."
Purpose: Describe the first set of trends in detail.
What to include:
Focus on 1-2 categories or trends (e.g., increasing categories or categories with the highest values).
Support with data (percentages, values, years).
Use comparative language where applicable.
Example:
"In 2000, the percentage of people in City A who used public transport was 40%, increasing steadily to 60% by 2020. Similarly, City B saw a significant rise from 30% to 70% during the same period. By contrast, private vehicle use declined from 50% to 20%."
Purpose: Describe the second set of trends in detail.
What to include:
Focus on another 1-2 trends or comparisons (e.g., decreasing categories, other cities).
Support with specific data.
Highlight unusual or unique trends.
Example:
"Conversely, in City D, private vehicle usage remained consistently high at around 50% throughout the period, showing minimal change. Additionally, public transport use in City E fluctuated between 40% and 45% over the years without a clear upward or downward trend."
Identify the most significant information (e.g., highest, lowest, trends).
Look for patterns: Are there increases, decreases, or fluctuations?
Focus on comparisons (across categories or over time).
Key Points:
Paraphrase the prompt using synonyms and different sentence structures.
Be concise but precise (only 1-2 sentences).
Development Example:
Prompt: The line graph shows the number of international students enrolled in universities in Canada from 2000 to 2020.
Paraphrase: The line graph presents data on the enrollment of international students in Canadian universities over a 20-year period (2000 to 2020).
Key Points:
Highlight the big picture—avoid specific numbers.
Mention:
The most noticeable trend (e.g., steady growth or significant decline).
Highest and lowest categories.
Any anomalies (e.g., sharp spikes or periods of stability).
Development Example:
"Overall, the number of international students increased significantly across the entire period, reaching its peak in 2020. Despite a minor dip in 2015, the upward trend remained consistent in all institutions."
Key Points:
Focus on specific details for one trend or category.
Include comparisons and support with data.
Use linking phrases ("in contrast", "similarly", "while").
Development Example:
"Between 2000 and 2010, international enrollment at the University of Toronto rose from 10,000 to 25,000 students, representing a 150% increase. This trend was mirrored by McGill University, which experienced a growth from 5,000 to 15,000 students over the same period."
Key Points:
Focus on another set of trends (different categories or years).
Highlight any contrasting data or unique trends.
Include specific figures where relevant.
Development Example:
"In contrast, enrollment at the University of British Columbia saw a modest increase, rising from 8,000 in 2000 to 12,000 in 2020. Unlike the other universities, it experienced a notable plateau between 2010 and 2015."
Increase: rise, grow, climb, surge, soar.
Example: "The number of users rose steadily."
Decrease: fall, decline, drop, plummet, dip.
Example: "The proportion of private car users dropped significantly."
Stability: remain constant, plateau, level off.
Example: "The rate of employment remained unchanged."
Fluctuations: fluctuate, vary, experience changes.
Example: "The temperature fluctuated between 10°C and 15°C."
Similarly, in contrast, whereas, while, compared to, on the other hand.
Example: "Whereas the number of bus users increased, car users decreased."
Skipping the Overview: This is essential for a high band score.
Repeating the same words: Use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Including unnecessary details: Focus only on key trends.
Misinterpreting the data: Ensure your descriptions align with the actual visual information.
Question: The bar chart below shows the percentage of students choosing four different university subjects in 2010 and 2020.
Introduction:
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of students selecting four different subjects (science, arts, business, and engineering) at universities in 2010 and 2020.
Overview:
Overall, science and business were the most popular subjects in both years, while arts remained the least chosen. The percentage of students opting for engineering showed a steady increase.
Body 1 (First Trend):
In 2010, approximately 40% of students chose science, making it the most popular subject. By 2020, this figure increased slightly to 45%. Similarly, business accounted for 35% of the student population in 2010, rising to 40% in 2020.
Body 2 (Second Trend):
By contrast, arts saw a minimal increase from 10% in 2010 to 12% in 2020, remaining the least popular. Meanwhile, the percentage of students studying engineering rose from 15% in 2010 to 25% in 2020, indicating growing interest in the field.
Instead of overcomplicating things, stick to this proven structure:
1️⃣ Introduction (1-2 sentences)
Summarize what the table/chart shows.
Example: The table presents data on the ten most expensive countries for petrol, comparing disposable income, fuel expenditure, and affordability.
2️⃣ Overview (Key Trends) – The Most Important Part!
Identify major patterns (highest vs. lowest, extreme cases, general trends).
Example: Eritrea and Turkey have the highest financial burden for fuel, while Norway and Sweden enjoy lower relative costs due to high incomes.
3️⃣ Detailed Comparisons (High & Low Groups)
Discuss extreme cases first (who spends the most/least).
Compare two or three groups instead of listing every country.
Example: Eritrea spends 61.1% of income on fuel, while Norway only spends 7.4%.
4️⃣ Additional Comparisons & Conclusion
Highlight any mid-tier trends or interesting patterns.
Example: Mid-range countries like Denmark and Belgium allocate 7-10% of income to fuel, which is significantly lower than Greece and Italy.
You don’t need fancy words to score Band 8 or 9. Instead, use precise, formal, and varied vocabulary:
Instead of…
Use…
Spends money
Allocates funds, directs income, devotes earnings
High cost
Significant expenditure, financial strain
Low cost
Affordable, less burden, manageable expenses
Big difference
Noticeable disparity, sharp contrast
Pro Tip: Just one or two advanced words per paragraph is enough!
Don’t over-explain numbers.
✅ Eritrea spends 61.1% of its $450 monthly income on fuel.
❌ Eritrea has an income of $450 per month, and from this amount, 61.1% is spent on fuel, making it the highest percentage in the table.
Don’t list too many numbers. Just highlight key ones.
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In IELTS Writing Task 2, you must write an essay in response to a question or statement in at least 250 words. You will be assessed on task response, coherence and cohesion, lexical resource, and grammatical range and accuracy. The types of essays typically include:
Opinion (Agree/Disagree) Essay
Discussion (Both Views) Essay
Advantages and Disadvantages Essay
Problem and Solution Essay
Direct Question Essay
1. Introduction (40-50 words)
Paraphrase the question.
State your thesis (answer the question directly).
Outline the key points that you will discuss.
2. Body Paragraph 1 (90-100 words)
Topic sentence: Introduce your first main idea.
Explanation: Explain the idea in more detail.
Example: Provide a relevant example to support your point.
Link: Conclude the paragraph and link back to the essay question.
3. Body Paragraph 2 (90-100 words)
Repeat the structure for your second main idea.
4. Conclusion (40-50 words)
Summarize the main points.
Restate your opinion (for opinion essays) or provide a final thought.
In this type of essay, you must state whether you agree, disagree, or partially agree with the statement.
Structure:
Introduction: State your position clearly (agree/disagree/partially agree).
Body Paragraph 1: Present your first reason for your opinion and support it with examples.
Body Paragraph 2: Present your second reason and support it with examples.
Conclusion: Summarize your arguments and restate your opinion.
Key Phrases:
"I strongly agree/disagree with the statement because..."
"In my opinion, this approach has both benefits and drawbacks..."
"This is evident from..."
Grammar Focus:
Modal verbs ("should", "must", "might").
Conditionals ("If this happens, the consequences could be...").
Passive voice to add emphasis ("It is often argued that...").
In this type, you must discuss both views and state your opinion.
Structure:
Introduction: Paraphrase the question, introduce both views, and state your opinion.
Body Paragraph 1: Explain the first view and provide an example.
Body Paragraph 2: Explain the second view and provide an example.
Conclusion: Summarize both views and restate your opinion.
Key Phrases:
"Supporters of this view believe that..."
"On the other hand, opponents argue that..."
"Although both sides have merits, I believe that..."
Grammar Focus:
Comparative phrases ("while some believe that..., others argue that...").
Cohesive devices ("however", "whereas", "on the other hand").
In this type, you must discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a given topic.
Structure:
Introduction: Introduce the topic and state that you will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
Body Paragraph 1: Describe the advantages with examples.
Body Paragraph 2: Describe the disadvantages with examples.
Conclusion: Summarize the main points and state your overall view (if required).
Key Phrases:
"One of the main advantages of..."
"A significant drawback is that..."
"The benefits outweigh the drawbacks because..."
Grammar Focus:
Use "therefore", "as a result", "consequently" for cause-effect relationships.
Use quantifiers ("many", "several", "few") to describe the magnitude of pros/cons.
In this type, you must identify the problem(s) and suggest solution(s).
Structure:
Introduction: Paraphrase the question and state that you will discuss the problem(s) and solution(s).
Body Paragraph 1: Describe the problem(s) with examples.
Body Paragraph 2: Describe the solution(s) with examples.
Conclusion: Summarize the main points and provide a final suggestion or prediction.
Key Phrases:
"One of the major issues is..."
"A possible solution to this problem is..."
"To mitigate this issue, the government/individuals should..."
Grammar Focus:
Use passive voice for formal suggestions ("It is recommended that...").
Use "if" clauses to present solutions ("If stricter regulations are implemented...").
In this type, you are asked to answer two or more questions related to a topic.
Structure:
Introduction: Paraphrase the question and briefly state your answers to the questions.
Body Paragraph 1: Answer the first question with explanations and examples.
Body Paragraph 2: Answer the second question with explanations and examples.
Conclusion: Summarize the answers and provide a final thought.
Key Phrases:
"The first question concerns..."
"Regarding the second question, it is clear that..."
"It is evident that..."
Grammar Focus:
Relative clauses ("which", "who", "that") for detailed answers.
Use synonyms to avoid repetition of key terms.
Clear Position:
Always make your stance clear in the introduction and support it consistently throughout the essay.
Avoid contradicting your thesis.
Balanced Explanation:
Explain your points logically and avoid emotional or vague statements.
Use data, research, or logical reasoning for support (even hypothetical examples).
Use Examples Effectively:
Provide relevant and specific examples that are relatable.
Avoid overusing personal experiences ("In my own life...") unless phrased generally.
Cohesive Devices:
Use linking words to ensure your ideas flow smoothly ("furthermore", "in addition", "on the contrary").
Avoid overusing "and", "but", or "so".
Avoid Common Mistakes:
Don’t copy phrases from the question; paraphrase instead.
Avoid informal language and contractions (e.g., "don’t", "can’t").
Complex Sentences:
Combine ideas using subordinating conjunctions ("although", "because", "while").
Passive Voice:
Useful for formal tone and when the actor is not important ("The policy was implemented to reduce pollution.").
Modals for Suggestions:
"Should", "must", "could", "might" for recommendations or speculations.
Conditional Sentences:
"If-clauses" to express possible outcomes ("If governments invest in education, literacy rates will improve.").
Plan Before You Write:
Spend 3-5 minutes planning your essay structure and ideas.
Time Management:
Spend 35 minutes writing and 5 minutes proofreading.
Proofread Your Work:
Check for grammar mistakes, spelling, and sentence structure.
By following these tips and using the correct structure for each type of essay, you’ll be well-prepared to achieve a high band score in IELTS Writing Task 2!
In IELTS Writing Task 2, you are required to write a formal essay in at least 250 words in response to a prompt. The essay types include opinion essays, discussion essays, problem-solution essays, advantages-disadvantages essays, and two-part question essays. Here's a guide on how to structure and develop each paragraph effectively.
Purpose: Introduce the topic, paraphrase the question, and provide your thesis (your position or answer to the question).
What to include:
Paraphrase the question (using synonyms).
State your thesis (opinion/answer to the question).
Outline the main points (briefly mention the ideas you will discuss).
Example (Opinion Essay Question):
Some people believe that online learning is better than classroom learning. Do you agree or disagree?
Introduction Example:
"With the advancements in technology, many people now prefer online education over traditional classroom-based learning. While online learning offers flexibility and convenience, I strongly believe that classroom learning remains more effective due to its interactive environment and better accountability."
Purpose: Present your first main idea and support it with explanations and examples.
What to include:
Topic sentence (introduce your first main point).
Explanation (expand on the point).
Example (real-life or hypothetical example).
Closing/linking sentence (link to the next idea).
Development Example:
Main Point 1: Classroom learning fosters interaction.
"One of the primary benefits of classroom learning is the opportunity for live interaction. Students can ask questions and receive immediate feedback from their teachers, which enhances understanding. For instance, in a science lab session, students can collaborate with their peers, which improves their communication and teamwork skills. Such interactions are often limited in online classes, where engagement can be passive and isolated."
Purpose: Present your second main idea and support it with explanations and examples.
What to include:
Topic sentence (introduce the second main point).
Explanation (expand on the point).
Example (real-life or hypothetical example).
Closing sentence (restate the main idea or provide a transition).
Development Example:
Main Point 2: Classroom learning improves accountability and discipline.
"Additionally, classroom environments promote better accountability, as students are physically present and must adhere to schedules. This helps maintain focus and ensures regular participation. For example, students attending traditional universities must follow attendance rules and submit assignments on time, which builds time management skills. In contrast, online learning often lacks such supervision, leading to procrastination and reduced motivation."
Purpose: Summarize your main points and restate your thesis or provide a final thought.
What to include:
Restate your thesis (paraphrase your opinion/answer).
Summarize the main points.
Provide a concluding statement or recommendation.
Conclusion Example:
"In conclusion, although online learning has made education more accessible, classroom-based education remains more effective due to its interactive nature and structured environment. Therefore, schools and universities should prioritize face-to-face learning while integrating online tools as complementary resources."
Identify the type of question: Is it asking for your opinion, a discussion of both views, solutions to a problem, or advantages/disadvantages?
Break down the question: Identify the key points you need to address.
Example Question:
Many people believe that cities should be car-free zones to reduce pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
View 1: Cities should be car-free.
View 2: Cars are necessary for daily life.
Your opinion: Do you agree/disagree?
Paraphrase the question by rewording it using synonyms and different sentence structures.
State your opinion clearly if required.
Example Introduction:
"Urban pollution has become a significant issue, leading some to argue that cities should prohibit cars entirely, while others believe that cars remain essential for daily commuting. This essay will discuss both perspectives and argue that, although reducing car usage is beneficial, a complete ban is impractical."
State the first view (agree/disagree) and explain it with reasons and examples.
Use linking words to create flow (e.g., "Firstly", "For instance", "In contrast").
Example Body Paragraph 1:
"On the one hand, banning cars from cities could significantly reduce air pollution and improve public health. Cars emit harmful gases such as carbon dioxide, which contribute to respiratory issues. For example, several European cities, such as Oslo and Copenhagen, have implemented car-free zones and reported a decrease in asthma-related hospital visits. Additionally, without cars, streets would become safer for pedestrians and cyclists."
State the second view and explain why some people hold this opinion.
Provide counterpoints or concessions if needed.
Example Body Paragraph 2:
"On the other hand, many people argue that cars remain a necessity, especially in large cities where public transport may not be sufficient. For instance, people living in suburban areas may rely on cars to commute to work or transport goods. Completely banning cars could inconvenience these individuals and hinder economic activities. Moreover, emergency services such as ambulances require road access to operate efficiently."
Summarize both views briefly and provide your final stance or recommendation.
Avoid adding new ideas in the conclusion.
Example Conclusion:
"In summary, while banning cars from city centers could improve air quality and safety, it may also create significant challenges for commuters and essential services. A more balanced approach, such as introducing low-emission zones and promoting public transport, would be a more practical solution."
Stay Focused on the Task:
Avoid going off-topic or introducing irrelevant ideas.
Use Clear and Relevant Examples:
Provide realistic or hypothetical examples (e.g., "For instance, many countries like Japan have implemented...").
Use Cohesive Devices for Flow:
"Firstly", "Furthermore", "In contrast", "However", "Therefore".
Avoid Generalizations:
Instead of "Everyone agrees that online learning is better", use "Many students find online learning more convenient."
Maintain Formality:
Avoid contractions ("don’t" → "do not") and informal phrases.
"In my opinion,..."
"I believe that..."
"It is evident that..."
"Some argue that..."
"On the one hand..., on the other hand..."
"While..., it is also important to note that..."
"In contrast..."
"Similarly..."
"Therefore", "As a result", "Consequently", "Thus", "Due to".
Complex Sentences: Use relative clauses ("which", "that", "who") and subordinating conjunctions ("although", "because", "while").
Modal Verbs: Use "should", "must", "could" for suggestions and obligations.
Conditionals: Use "if" clauses to discuss possible outcomes.
Question:
Nowadays, many people suffer from stress-related illnesses. What are the causes of stress, and what can be done to address this issue?
Introduction:
Paraphrase: "Stress-related health issues are becoming increasingly common due to modern lifestyle demands."
Thesis: "This essay will discuss the main causes of stress and suggest possible solutions."
Body Paragraph 1 (Causes):
Topic Sentence: "One major cause of stress is the pressure of work deadlines."
Explanation: "People often work overtime to meet targets, leading to burnout."
Example: "A recent survey shows that 70% of employees experience work-related stress."
Another cause: Financial difficulties also contribute to stress.
Body Paragraph 2 (Solutions):
Topic Sentence: "To tackle stress, companies should implement work-life balance policies."
Explanation: "Flexible hours and wellness programs can help employees manage their stress levels."
Example: "Some companies in Sweden have introduced a 6-hour workday, which has improved employee productivity."
Final suggestion: "Governments should also provide mental health support services."
Conclusion:
Summarize causes and solutions.
Final thought: "Addressing work-related stress through balanced policies can improve overall wellbeing."
By using this structure and approach, you can write a well-organized and coherent IELTS Task 2 essay that addresses all parts of the question and demonstrates strong argumentation.
step-by-step, stress-free way to tackle it and improve gradually.
Instead of overcomplicating things, use this reliable essay structure:
Paraphrase the question → Don’t copy! Rewrite it in your own words.
Give your opinion (if required) → Clearly state your position.
✅ Example (Topic: Social Media Impact on Society)
❌ Nowadays, social media is widely used by people, and it has both advantages and disadvantages. (Too simple, copied from the question!)
✅ With the rapid rise of social media, interactions and communication have drastically evolved. While some argue that it strengthens relationships, others believe it causes social isolation. (Paraphrased & clear!)
Start with a clear topic sentence → What is your argument?
Explain it briefly → Why is this important?
Give an example → Real-life or research-based.
✅ Example (Supporting Social Media’s Positive Impact)
💡 Social media has significantly improved global communication, enabling people to stay connected regardless of location. Platforms like WhatsApp and Facebook allow individuals to maintain relationships with friends and family despite geographical barriers. For example, a study by Pew Research in 2021 found that 73% of long-distance friendships are sustained due to digital communication tools.
Introduce the opposing view (if required)
Explain it briefly
Refute it (if needed) OR provide balance
✅ Example (Negative Impact of Social Media)
💡 Despite these benefits, excessive social media use can lead to isolation rather than connection. Many individuals spend hours online but struggle with in-person communication, affecting mental health. Research from Cambridge University (2022) found that teenagers who spend over five hours daily on social media are 40% more likely to feel lonely than those who use it moderately.
Summarize your points
Give a final opinion or recommendation
✅ Example:
💡 In conclusion, social media enhances communication but also presents risks of social isolation. To maximize its benefits, users should balance online interactions with real-world connections.
You don’t need to use overly complex words! Instead, focus on precision and variety.
Instead of…
Use…
Important
Crucial, Essential, Significant
Good
Beneficial, Advantageous, Favorable
Bad
Harmful, Detrimental, Adverse
Problem
Issue, Challenge, Concern
Solution
Approach, Strategy, Remedy
💡 Instead of writing full essays every time, try this:
Day 1: Write only the introduction (2 sentences).
Day 2: Write one body paragraph (with an example).
Day 3: Write another body paragraph.
Day 4: Write the full essay with a conclusion.
This step-by-step method helps you improve without burnout.
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